first impression: a little girly for my taste and to be honest i thought "oh dear god another girly-girl who follows every little trend out there and doesn't think for herself", but i realized i was being a bit judgemental and pink doesn't neccissarily mean that you are like that. [5/10]

navigation:yup, its all easy to find, right there at the bottum of the entry. it all works too. [3/3]

content: my first impression was obviously wrong. you aren't some airhead who has no thoughts of her own, i don't know why, but i alway assiociate pink with that. first, im sure you're sick of hearing this, but i've got to say that i'm so very sorry for your loss. i think that you are brutally honest in your diary and thats a very admirable quality. i think your pain about your father's illness and death is very real. i have found that a lot of people on diaryland and in life in general who make life sound worse than it is for attention. i don't think this is what you do. your writing, even though it can be about mundane, everyday things, its still interested me very much. i found that i had to tear myself away from your diary to finish this review. i think i'd like you in real life, but im not quite sure. i do know that you sound very intelligent and witty. [20/25]

layout:like i said before, im not fond of pink. i think theres too much of it in there and i think that the layout is a bit too plain. i can see how someone would like it very much. i do like the personal touch that you put into it. the pictures of you and your friends and the left side adds something unique and cool to it. it shows that you actually put effort into it. [15/20]

updates: more recently you have been skipping a few days between entries, but thats understandable. in general, though you update everyday and sometimes multiple times in one day. [8/10]

our link:yup, its there and it works, easy-peasy.

bugs: in your "design" and "quotes" sections theres some problems with the html, but other than that, none that i found. [5/10]

ledgibilty: its fine. you occationally leave a letter out, but we can't expect you to go back and spell check each entry, can we? [2/2]

will i come back?:um...maybe. [3/5]

bonus: your list of extras is amazing, i really like the way you put pictures of you and your friends on your template. [15/15]

total: [76/90]

you have been reviewed by:sarah

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