First Impression: The layout doesn't really appeal to me. The combination of pinks doesn't make me want to stay. The writing is fine. I am not instantly enthralled, but I am not replused, either. [1/2]

navigation: Everything seems to work, except for the email link. Our link is there and it works. I like that you have everything under extras. [0.5/1]

Content: Your content isn't anything truly special or inspirational. Its just what you'd expect to hear from a teen. Sometimes I find myself thinking that you are trying to hard to impress your readers. Still, the writing isn't bad and I read it with a steady level of at least moderate interest. Your entries were relatable. Grammar and spelling was good. [2/3]

Layout: Gulp. I didn't really like the layout. The shades of pink didn't appeal to me. I didn't like the big empty space to the right. I understand why you chose this layout, because you are obviously a fan of this band. I am glad that you at least chose a layout that suited your personality. There are no bugs in your layout. Its simply the design that I don't like. If I were a person just coming to visit your diary, I would not be attracted at all by the layout. [1/3]

updates: Often enough for me. [1/1]

Will I come back? Maybe once or twice, but that will probably be it. You have a lot of extras, they probably took a considerable amount of work, so you will be rewarded for that. [1.5]

Total: [7/10]

You have been reviewed by: Sarah

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